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STRANDED in HELL ((/F comic, contains demonic nudity(M, F))
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Time for some payback? lol
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No, it was not. Merely coincidence. 🙂
Actually, Ariel's focus shifts towards dear Dora in this last shot... and the latter is exhausted so pretty much can't do anything against what Ariel has in mind.
In theory this could turn out really bad for our poor librarian who, assumedly, already is in Hell for no good reason. In reality this is the ramp up towards one of the really important events in the comic, so important that I expanded the frame to stand out in between of the rest. See next page... but for that you'll have to check back this weekend. And if that's not enough, you'll get one of the most important questions answered in the page right after. Yes, this story is starting to run on its end, because the last week before the re-opening of the v-shift has started and soon Hell will get the report on for what reasons Dora is in Hell.
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OMG! She said the f-word. Satan aint gonna lika that,
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Way to go, Priella. Maybe now Satan will get the idea. Or banish you.........
Question: If a demon or demoness would get banished from Hell, does that mean they'd be thrown to the mortal realm or would they simply cease to exist altogether?
Question: If a demon or demoness would get banished from Hell, does that mean they'd be thrown to the mortal realm or would they simply cease to exist altogether?
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"Now you're talking double team...supreme!"
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People are going through change, based on their environment and experiences. Priëlla didn't want this, but she can't ignore the fact that Dora has always stood on her side, tried to back her up... she saved her once from being banished, even tried to save her from receiving more pain dealt by Ariel while she has only been torturing Dora so far. She had never had a friend before (which is rather standard in Hell even though the two 'drinking buddies' in the previous flash back seemed rather friendly to each other) and has got the idea of what friendship is about and what it is to have a friend. The fact that Dora was now going to be get through a load of pain on Priëlla's account was the last drop that made her realize and confess that yes, Dora has become her friend. Despite of the fact how "wrong" that is.
Also Dora has gone through change, even if not that huge. When she entered Hell she "never wanted to hurt a fly" so to say. She refused tickling Sarah even though she didn't seem that nice a person. Along the way she got the urge to help tickle torturing Sarah (After Sarah almost banished Priëlla) and now she's taking part in the retribution against Ariel as well. Even though she has not gone towards using pain, she is using tickling for more than a playful bit of fun.
And I will slip this through: This is not where the change ends... 😉 Make of it what you will.
Or maybe at least Ariel might get the idea... the direct way may not be the most efficient way.
Basically cease to exist, but there essence, a sort of living part of them may be trapped in nothingness, able to feel, maybe think for eternity without being able to move, act or escape. Basically they have a ban on Hell, but they're not sent to the mortal realm as they could cause a lot of havoc there and by dying (if they could) they would have to return to.... Hell? From which they are banned. So nothingness is where they go.
Hehe... 🙂
You'd probably see Sarah take sides with Ariel next, if only to oppose Dora (who she disgusts now) and Priëlla (who she still wants to give a payback). So it would almost be a team versus team. But at least you do get to see a demon tickled again, and a little more this time.
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*has a marvel vs capcom moment*
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Thats is thats world's grim reaper hm?...I wonder how many other people that are dead that really should not be. And dead people that are suppose to be still walking.
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XD a literal brush with death
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Great job as always 🙂
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So let me get this straight... Priella the Tickling Succubus, created just to tickle people in hell... is a noob? Well that is interesting. Anyways I am not one who should put critics... but watch out for proportion of the things... for example glasses here. They are small in close up, but big in far away screen.
Also sorry I didn't email you before, but I am stuck with few chores, but I am still doing what we talked about... so although collecting material and writing it all out might last longer, it will be better. UI is great, but I will call you later on for continuance of the project.
Also sorry I didn't email you before, but I am stuck with few chores, but I am still doing what we talked about... so although collecting material and writing it all out might last longer, it will be better. UI is great, but I will call you later on for continuance of the project.
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Dora the tickle jedi ^^
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Aw, I was hopin to see Dora and group get a life out of hell.
Hm, an apartment with a librarian, a murder, and a tickle demon.................
I smell a sitcom! 😀
Getting screwed over by Death has to be one of the worst deaths out there. lol
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Yeah. hehe, Remember how she was 'created', right? Not the best situation to get high quality stuff, now is it? 😉 Basically she's been very straight forward in her tickling, thinking that 'more is better'. Things don't all work just like that in tickling.
I'm aware of the glasses. They're a big nuisance. You can see I'm not used to draw characters with glasses... trying to keep them somewhat steady but failing a lot. Not going to be a problem much longer though. And they are really supposed to be quite big.
No problem. 🙂
Hehe, yeah. Funny you mention 'Jedi' because there's something Starwars related coming up very soon.
Yes. Trust the librarian to know a lot! But this she didn't get from books. 😉
She doesn't deserve that. 😉 But let's see what happens next, shall we?
Hehe...
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What do the other girl do now when Priella and Dora are away? She havin a break?
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Good question. Sleep probably, considering she has also been tickled for days (and nights) on end. She's there though (just not inside the frames). You can still see her lying on the ground behind Dora on page 23. Either way she doesn't play any further part in this story. You'll see her only once more in the future.
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okay... i hate to write this, i know I'm going to get a lot of flack for what I'm about to say but what must be said must be said. a opinion unvoiced is an opinion unaddressed, if i don't say anything there is no way you'll know how i feel, weather or not you care that's up to you.
so where do i begin? well lets start off with a general summarization of everything, it might be blunt but i think its how i will start this time. starting with the main cast, most of them are slightly bland and slightly uninteresting, they have aspects that i like but for the most part they're just your normal every day oddballs. in fact i think the one I'd like to know more about is the one least touched upon. Dora is the most bland, an uninteresting character here, she is kind and nice, but that's just about it. Priella is, well she's different, that's all there is to her its almost as if her entire character revolves around the idea that she's different. Sarah is the most interesting one, as she is the one i can assume least about and is probably the one most of us would likely be like in this situation. her anger/attitude is entirely justified, but she's mainly just pushed aside as a side character for the most part. hell itself is sooo far from what i would think it would be like, the biggest problem is its almost as if this hell isn't actually what you think hell would be like, but more so how you made hell to be like so it would fit your story. lastly Diablo is... -sigh- ill get to Diablo later. overall its interesting mainly because its located in hell but the story line has a bit of a blatant (i think i spelled that wrong) ideal and nothing else.
starting again with the main cast:
Dora like i said is bland and uninteresting, there really isn't much to her. she got unlucky enough to be sent to hell and her role is to be the resident optimist. even though she has almost no reason to be optimistic that doesn't stop this one track minded character. she's very straight forward this can be a good thing but i just don't like it. the main character is basically a Merry sue. she has almost no downside to her, maybe a bit of lust (as seen with her ogling Diablo) but that was more so for comic relief than character development. in fact her character very little developed. now i know that a librarian would obviously be the source of excitement in this story but even for what she is she's kinda bland. honestly a decent idea for the way she should be (now realize a lot of this is opinion so yeah) is she probably should have started out very timid and shy (even in hell) being more so frozen by fear then anything else, she would then have been forced to come out of her shell to defend herself and her new found friends. but no, she's just kind that's really all there is to her...
Priella again is a bit straight forward. though more interesting then Dora by FAR, she still really only has one purpose upon the plot, being the oddball of hell. being as she likes a "exotic" form of torture (don't get me started on tickling being torture...) and as such is chastised for it. so much so that hell seemingly has nothing better to do then to show there dislike for her, cause you know they are not supposed to be torturing people right? she has a pretty solid motive, she wants to convince the rest of hell that her methods though unorthodox are efficient. the problem is, is that her entire ideal is based around this, and nothing else, its almost as if her personality is just to be different as i said earlier. honestly i don't even think its Priella's fault here, i think the character itself is actually not to bad and the actual reason she seems so bland is because hell itself is bland. the entirety of hell has a very black and white feel to it, with no real deviation to good and evil, being good and/or evil is not a state but a degree this is not the case in this hell. everyone here is either good, evil or both good and evil depending on the situation. im going to try and not get to far into hell here but just keep in mind just because hell is supposed to be the ultimate source of evil doesn't mean that they are fully evil in every seance of the word. and lastly GOD DAMN IT PRIELLA GROW SOME TOES! >.< XD
Sarah is actually the most interesting and the one i have least to say about, she actually seems more like the realistic one here, her feelings and ideals fit the situation fairly perfectly. the problem with her is the lack of attention she gets. she ends up going from the most interesting character to the least touched uppon character. its a real shame to, she actually seems like she could have been a less black and white character and probably would have spiced things up a bit.
Diablo... im going to say it outright, I hate this diablo... i hate almost everything about him. you ever hear the ideal that diablo appears as who you least expect, well i think you probably nailed that one because there is no way in HELL i would ever have thought that diablo would look like a los vegas magician... alright, well the way he looks really isnt what matters in fact he could actually pull off that look if his personality is right so how dose that fair... well... lets just say im not taking back what i said. i think my biggest problem with diablo here is the fact that at best he's little more then an obstical to overcome, and at worst he's little more then a whiney little bitch... i mean come on he's surrounded by torture day in and day out screaming torture. oh but laughter is the bane of his ears. scratch nails across a black board, blow an air horn in his ear just PLEASE NO LAUGHTER anything but laughter... in addition to this he really dosnt seem like he commands the respect that he should, even being evil he should be able to look at a demon and make them bow without even doing anything else. he barely seems like he can order around someone who WANTS TO DO WHAT HE'S ASKING. why is this guy the leader of hell again? -sigh- i duknow he's like everything but what i would think diablo would and or could be like. i mean even if diablo is the root of all evil that dosnt mean he cant be swave and/or charismatic, in fact he honestly should be a very intelgent leader who is always looking for the next best way to run hell. he should be able to see posobility in everything not just shoo it away because its not fitting into the box, he wouldnt even have a box he would realise that everyone has a unique fear and if that fear is tickling then bring on the feather dusters!
next is hell itself and all the side cast. starting off the side cast is almost non existant and in fact usually just brushed asside after their use is fullfilled. for instance i was actually told that, that demon i was joking about was a high ranking demon, well what kind of high ranking demon, what dose he do, how dose he do it, what is he like? do we find this out? hell no the guy might as well have been named plot convinience because he really didnt do anything else then move the plot along... the random demons around hell are interesting though im not to fond of how they look, there really isnt any structure to them, where as the sucubi are all similar in their own right, the random demons are so different from one another that its really hard to tell they are all demons... but its a distinct style not nessisarily what i would like to see but its there and its ok. hell itself is again far from what i think it would be, its chaotic and unmanaged. honestly hell should be a well oiled machine a business if you will. the lower down minions would probably end up being very impulsive but there would be "cops" of some sort to regulate everything to make sure hell was running how it should. this next problem i have is probably one of my bigger ones. pain, look we all know that pain is a decent torture we all know that pain is probably one of the most common tortures. however most of us know that pain is not the most effective torture, in fact more effective tortures deal with torturing the mind and not the body. pain goes away, woonds heal, scars of the mind stay and rot long after the torture is finished. the idea that i know this and hell dosnt is just perposterous in every sence of the word. honestly the torture should be ever vareing, hell should be versatile because our fears are versatile. though i realise the reason why its so one track minded in this sence, it just dosnt fit hell imo. like i said this hell dosnt even seem like your idea of hell, it seems like it was a hell you created to fit the story line. it dose what it came to do but unfortunatly i just dont think that what it came to do was what it should have came to do.
so now that we've explored the general story what about the other aspect, the tickling... well... its lacking, out of 27 page comic based on tickling there is alot of IMPLIED TICKLING but what is shown is kind of little. its there and when it comes up its great (though again this is another area that isnt for me, for im into feet tickling and i think theres only like one place that the feet are tickled specifically) but it just feels like there isnt enough of it.
over all, is it horible? no its good, it has its flaws but most of them are my openion there are plenty of people who like it and though alot of it kind of feels like its entire purpose was to be something i didnt like its not bad it dose what it came to do and is still an interesting story despite its defects. i have my problems with it and i have said them, i really really hope that what i have said dose not sound offensive. it probably did and i appologise greatly for it. i really really hope i didnt hurt anyones feelings/ piss anyone off, but knowing my luck im pretty sure i did. i hope that after this you dont hate me but i understand if you do. and though i probably left out quite a few things i think i got across the main points.
and lastly i think it obvious that this entire comic would be VASTLY improved with the addition of a demon named avaria. after that this comic would be perfect. XD jk
keep up the good work but realise that nothing is perfect.
so where do i begin? well lets start off with a general summarization of everything, it might be blunt but i think its how i will start this time. starting with the main cast, most of them are slightly bland and slightly uninteresting, they have aspects that i like but for the most part they're just your normal every day oddballs. in fact i think the one I'd like to know more about is the one least touched upon. Dora is the most bland, an uninteresting character here, she is kind and nice, but that's just about it. Priella is, well she's different, that's all there is to her its almost as if her entire character revolves around the idea that she's different. Sarah is the most interesting one, as she is the one i can assume least about and is probably the one most of us would likely be like in this situation. her anger/attitude is entirely justified, but she's mainly just pushed aside as a side character for the most part. hell itself is sooo far from what i would think it would be like, the biggest problem is its almost as if this hell isn't actually what you think hell would be like, but more so how you made hell to be like so it would fit your story. lastly Diablo is... -sigh- ill get to Diablo later. overall its interesting mainly because its located in hell but the story line has a bit of a blatant (i think i spelled that wrong) ideal and nothing else.
starting again with the main cast:
Dora like i said is bland and uninteresting, there really isn't much to her. she got unlucky enough to be sent to hell and her role is to be the resident optimist. even though she has almost no reason to be optimistic that doesn't stop this one track minded character. she's very straight forward this can be a good thing but i just don't like it. the main character is basically a Merry sue. she has almost no downside to her, maybe a bit of lust (as seen with her ogling Diablo) but that was more so for comic relief than character development. in fact her character very little developed. now i know that a librarian would obviously be the source of excitement in this story but even for what she is she's kinda bland. honestly a decent idea for the way she should be (now realize a lot of this is opinion so yeah) is she probably should have started out very timid and shy (even in hell) being more so frozen by fear then anything else, she would then have been forced to come out of her shell to defend herself and her new found friends. but no, she's just kind that's really all there is to her...
Priella again is a bit straight forward. though more interesting then Dora by FAR, she still really only has one purpose upon the plot, being the oddball of hell. being as she likes a "exotic" form of torture (don't get me started on tickling being torture...) and as such is chastised for it. so much so that hell seemingly has nothing better to do then to show there dislike for her, cause you know they are not supposed to be torturing people right? she has a pretty solid motive, she wants to convince the rest of hell that her methods though unorthodox are efficient. the problem is, is that her entire ideal is based around this, and nothing else, its almost as if her personality is just to be different as i said earlier. honestly i don't even think its Priella's fault here, i think the character itself is actually not to bad and the actual reason she seems so bland is because hell itself is bland. the entirety of hell has a very black and white feel to it, with no real deviation to good and evil, being good and/or evil is not a state but a degree this is not the case in this hell. everyone here is either good, evil or both good and evil depending on the situation. im going to try and not get to far into hell here but just keep in mind just because hell is supposed to be the ultimate source of evil doesn't mean that they are fully evil in every seance of the word. and lastly GOD DAMN IT PRIELLA GROW SOME TOES! >.< XD
Sarah is actually the most interesting and the one i have least to say about, she actually seems more like the realistic one here, her feelings and ideals fit the situation fairly perfectly. the problem with her is the lack of attention she gets. she ends up going from the most interesting character to the least touched uppon character. its a real shame to, she actually seems like she could have been a less black and white character and probably would have spiced things up a bit.
Diablo... im going to say it outright, I hate this diablo... i hate almost everything about him. you ever hear the ideal that diablo appears as who you least expect, well i think you probably nailed that one because there is no way in HELL i would ever have thought that diablo would look like a los vegas magician... alright, well the way he looks really isnt what matters in fact he could actually pull off that look if his personality is right so how dose that fair... well... lets just say im not taking back what i said. i think my biggest problem with diablo here is the fact that at best he's little more then an obstical to overcome, and at worst he's little more then a whiney little bitch... i mean come on he's surrounded by torture day in and day out screaming torture. oh but laughter is the bane of his ears. scratch nails across a black board, blow an air horn in his ear just PLEASE NO LAUGHTER anything but laughter... in addition to this he really dosnt seem like he commands the respect that he should, even being evil he should be able to look at a demon and make them bow without even doing anything else. he barely seems like he can order around someone who WANTS TO DO WHAT HE'S ASKING. why is this guy the leader of hell again? -sigh- i duknow he's like everything but what i would think diablo would and or could be like. i mean even if diablo is the root of all evil that dosnt mean he cant be swave and/or charismatic, in fact he honestly should be a very intelgent leader who is always looking for the next best way to run hell. he should be able to see posobility in everything not just shoo it away because its not fitting into the box, he wouldnt even have a box he would realise that everyone has a unique fear and if that fear is tickling then bring on the feather dusters!
next is hell itself and all the side cast. starting off the side cast is almost non existant and in fact usually just brushed asside after their use is fullfilled. for instance i was actually told that, that demon i was joking about was a high ranking demon, well what kind of high ranking demon, what dose he do, how dose he do it, what is he like? do we find this out? hell no the guy might as well have been named plot convinience because he really didnt do anything else then move the plot along... the random demons around hell are interesting though im not to fond of how they look, there really isnt any structure to them, where as the sucubi are all similar in their own right, the random demons are so different from one another that its really hard to tell they are all demons... but its a distinct style not nessisarily what i would like to see but its there and its ok. hell itself is again far from what i think it would be, its chaotic and unmanaged. honestly hell should be a well oiled machine a business if you will. the lower down minions would probably end up being very impulsive but there would be "cops" of some sort to regulate everything to make sure hell was running how it should. this next problem i have is probably one of my bigger ones. pain, look we all know that pain is a decent torture we all know that pain is probably one of the most common tortures. however most of us know that pain is not the most effective torture, in fact more effective tortures deal with torturing the mind and not the body. pain goes away, woonds heal, scars of the mind stay and rot long after the torture is finished. the idea that i know this and hell dosnt is just perposterous in every sence of the word. honestly the torture should be ever vareing, hell should be versatile because our fears are versatile. though i realise the reason why its so one track minded in this sence, it just dosnt fit hell imo. like i said this hell dosnt even seem like your idea of hell, it seems like it was a hell you created to fit the story line. it dose what it came to do but unfortunatly i just dont think that what it came to do was what it should have came to do.
so now that we've explored the general story what about the other aspect, the tickling... well... its lacking, out of 27 page comic based on tickling there is alot of IMPLIED TICKLING but what is shown is kind of little. its there and when it comes up its great (though again this is another area that isnt for me, for im into feet tickling and i think theres only like one place that the feet are tickled specifically) but it just feels like there isnt enough of it.
over all, is it horible? no its good, it has its flaws but most of them are my openion there are plenty of people who like it and though alot of it kind of feels like its entire purpose was to be something i didnt like its not bad it dose what it came to do and is still an interesting story despite its defects. i have my problems with it and i have said them, i really really hope that what i have said dose not sound offensive. it probably did and i appologise greatly for it. i really really hope i didnt hurt anyones feelings/ piss anyone off, but knowing my luck im pretty sure i did. i hope that after this you dont hate me but i understand if you do. and though i probably left out quite a few things i think i got across the main points.
and lastly i think it obvious that this entire comic would be VASTLY improved with the addition of a demon named avaria. after that this comic would be perfect. XD jk
keep up the good work but realise that nothing is perfect.
