Low_Roads
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Yes indeed, I can sure see how the lapse in continuity would prove disorienting, Darth V! Well, I'm very glad that you're now caught up, that you enjoyed both chapters, and especially that you were pleased with your cameo! I'm most interested to learn that I captured your Magnus Thane persona with some accuracy; that's due, I'm sure, to the generous wealth of knightly reference material you were kind enough to supply! Gratified, too, that you enjoyed the exchange between Magnus and Sir Kaldred; that piece of dialogue was great fun to devise! Quite right about the plotting... this chapter is burdened with an enormous share of exposition (as opposed to Chapter 10, where I'm basically firming up the background and laying hints), which accounts for its unusual length. True too about the leg through the floorboards! I was eager to give this stalwart, ever-reliable plot devise my own distinctive spin!
Thanks loads for the lengthy commentary and copious compliments! And don't worry... the wait for Chapter 11 won't seem nearly this long!
Thanks loads for the lengthy commentary and copious compliments! And don't worry... the wait for Chapter 11 won't seem nearly this long!