Jen - 'Destiny' (/F comic)

[Ilohnoh1]

Thats understandable. They were pretty good though. But keep up the fantastic work.

Thank you 🙂 And I intend to keep it up. 😀

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Now if you like feet... and you want to see something new... I think you'll really enjoy this page. It is almost akin to the scenes where someone's leg goes through the floor, gets stuck and gets tickled on the floor below... but this is different. I don't know if it has been done before, I have at least never seen it.

Also, this scene will continue on the entire next page as well so there's something to look forward to.

to be continued...

Ilo.

 

[11225]

:rofl: That came out of nowhere! I've rarely see something like this happening, and boy did that come out priceless. XD

 

[Ilohnoh1]

:rofl: That came out of nowhere! I've rarely see something like this happening, and boy did that come out priceless. XD

Not really out of nowhere. I know some of the transfers in this comic are fast, but there's a lot of story to cover. Anyway, The mouse was already seen, I think on page 3. Mouse holes were seen in the house here and there too. Jen's return to the house isn't probably a surprise either, because for one she already said she had 'an urge to return' and secondly she has no other place to go, really. Also, the dolls now know of Jen's sensitivity against tickling, and they obviously know how the mouse reacts when someone sticks something through the mouse's hole. They say that even, so yeah, they "let the mouse do it" for a change. With indeed great result. But the mouse does not listen to Jen's pleads...

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This is also the last comic page for this year. I'll likely start the work on page 17 tomorrow, but it won't go published the same day.

And this is a page with so much intelligent text on it too... heh. Anyway, looks like Jen ends this year in a little bit of a 'desperation scene'.

Enjoy and see you next year!

 

[11225]

Not really out of nowhere. I know some of the transfers in this comic are fast, but there's a lot of story to cover. Anyway, The mouse was already seen, I think on page 3. Mouse holes were seen in the house here and there too. Jen's return to the house isn't probably a surprise either, because for one she already said she had 'an urge to return' and secondly she has no other place to go, really. Also, the dolls now know of Jen's sensitivity against tickling, and they obviously know how the mouse reacts when someone sticks something through the mouse's hole. They say that even, so yeah, they "let the mouse do it" for a change. With indeed great result. But the mouse does not listen to Jen's pleads...


Enjoy and see you next year!

Same to you. And I think you're right, I may have overlooked the mouse holes and I did expect that Jen would have no choice but to go back in the abandoned house. But I now realized that what I said before, wasn't very specific. I meant that I rarely see anyone's foot get stuck in the mouse hole and end up having a ticklish situation, which was why it was so funny. Thankfully though, even though the floor broke, she's still alive...just at the mercy of the mouse to stop more than she was before.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Thankfully though, even though the floor broke, she's still alive...just at the mercy of the mouse to stop more than she was before.

Ah. The mouse isn't going to stop (not before she has retracted her foot out of the mouse's 'domain') but something else is going to happen and you can already see a hint of that on the former-last frame. 😉

 

[10 armed tkler]

How did she not break her leg or at the very least dislocate her-Oh right....comic.:sifone:

Lets see where this goes.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

How did she not break her leg or at the very least dislocate her-Oh right....comic.:sifone:

Lets see where this goes.

Between frame 4 and 5 she has actually turned. Instead of having her heel up and toes down, her heel is now down and toes up. This makes it so that her knee is not in trouble and she's actually being blocked from falling by the top of her foot. I now see there is actually a small 'placement inconsistency' (the hole in the floor in position compared to the location of the mouse hole) 😉

But if that is not enough for you, Jen is a strong woman and yes it is fiction. A grain of salt is not a bad thing sometimes. 😉

 

[11225]

Ah. The mouse isn't going to stop (not before she has retracted her foot out of the mouse's 'domain') but something else is going to happen and you can already see a hint of that on the former-last frame. 😉

Yes I have. 🙂

 

[Ilohnoh1]

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You could say that "Jen falls from one misfortune into the other"... but things look worse even than before... and she has an unexpected encounter... what will come of this? ...

stay tuned and you'll find out. 😉

Ilo.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

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And from this point onwards the pages will start coming in slower again. Holiday's over and it's back to work!

Anyway, hope you like the story so far.

Ilo.

 

[dude123]

She is her own arch-nemesis...wait, was that a pun?! 😛

 

[Ilohnoh1]

She is her own arch-nemesis...wait, was that a pun?! 😛

Ah yes, she is. But then again... aren't they really each others'? And in this following page, will the slave become the MASTER as Jen turns the tide on this tricky situation? Read and find out!

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... where the tickle fight Jenney vs Jennifer continues...

Ilo.

 

[TickleWiazard]

What a twist!

 

[Silentone]

Bravo to Jen. Using her own weakness against herself.

 

[11225]

When it comes to making clones, always be aware of the weakness, or else you'll make a flaw as well. That's one of the lesson we shouldn't overlook. 😉

So Jen (The human, not the doll) is really smart.

 

[Abadon XXX1]

got to love a good turnabout ^.^

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Thanks for all the comments!

I'm quickly posting the next page because it's already a bit later now than I was hoping and I need to go do stuffs.

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ilo.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

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and the story takes a strange turn. Is this doll for real or is she tricking Jen, like that other doll did?

Ilo.

 

[11225]

It's is a surprise, after all the tricks the dolls pulled, one finally decided to just talk. I wonder how this will turn out if Jen decided to do what that doll request? I also wonder what can happen if Jen is not convinced yet. Only you can tell. XD

Can wait to see the next page. 🙂

 

[Ilohnoh1]

It's is a surprise, after all the tricks the dolls pulled, one finally decided to just talk. I wonder how this will turn out if Jen decided to do what that doll request? I also wonder what can happen if Jen is not convinced yet. Only you can tell. XD

Can wait to see the next page. 🙂

Yes, there's surprises lurking behind each corner. And one of those surprises is that today... I have an EXTRA BIG UPDATE.

Here is page 22, 23 AND 24!

The latter two are a little different in style you see, and you get to read the last entries of Sandra's diary...

It's also the introduction of the REAL Kelsey Pennerchop.

 

[11225]

Hmm....I guess that made sense....the doll seem calm until she went out of control...so she's trusted for a while. And the diary did give some good info...I think there a connection with one of the other doll. I think.

 

[Kenjisan]

I can't tell if you're making a comic or writing a novel! : <

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Hmm....I guess that made sense....the doll seem calm until she went out of control...so she's trusted for a while. And the diary did give some good info...I think there a connection with one of the other doll. I think.

Thanks, Genikit. 😀
Now let's see what conclusions Jen may draw from this, eh? But before that, first next up she's going to meet the twins! 😉 (HER twins, that is.)

I can't tell if you're making a comic or writing a novel! : <

I'm sorry if you didn't like the last two pages, but this is a work of art and inspiration and this felt to me the right way to present the contents of the diary. A lot is happening there and sometimes a couple of words can mean more than a few pictures. I couldn't have expressed the contents of the diary with pictures on the same amount of space and a five-fold of pages devoted just to the contents of the diary (as in a 'flash-back' sort of way) would have stretched the story too much, too much delay and focus.

I think of my comics more as a work of art in which things are sometimes represented in a different way than the majority of comics does. Sometimes you see the story told in narrative, other times in litteral text said by the characters. I think it gives the whole work a more dynamic feel, without sticking to just one point of view or storytelling way.

By the way (as you might have guessed too), this is a real long chapter and you might very well compare it to a novel (it's a graphic-novel, mostly anyway)

 

[blackcat_mrau]

uuu, scary story! I really like it c: Never really liked dolls, probably after watching Chucky when I was a kid. aaand, sorry about asking this question so late, but I noticed that here Peggy's hair are short, but didn't she had long hair in the chapter where Jen gave birth to the twins? and I think you should publish again your previous comics, I really enjoyed the plots and would love to read them again! and it's also nice to see how your style has developed, but I totally understand that you want to have a fresh start on this, so treat it as a suggestion not as demand :blush

 

[Ilohnoh1]

uuu, scary story! I really like it c: Never really liked dolls, probably after watching Chucky when I was a kid. aaand, sorry about asking this question so late, but I noticed that here Peggy's hair are short, but didn't she had long hair in the chapter where Jen gave birth to the twins? and I think you should publish again your previous comics, I really enjoyed the plots and would love to read them again! and it's also nice to see how your style has developed, but I totally understand that you want to have a fresh start on this, so treat it as a suggestion not as demand :blush

Thanks for your comment, blackcat_mrau! It indeed starts off a bit scary.
Dolls (and clowns too by the way) can be really scary. Dolls especially at night I guess. Anyway, this is like a 'substory' within the chapter, and the dolls are not going to fill it entirely. Brenney is gone now by the way (although some may have been guessing that she would probably just wake up again) and the others will go as Jen solves the case. If you think, however, that Jen will get it easier then tickle-wise you're pretty wrong! It only yet has to begin.

You are right about Peggy's hair. It was a little below the shoulder in the original story. 😉

Thanks also for the interest in the old comics. My choice to remove them here were based on both the quality of the artwork and the content and there is at least currently no plan to republish them.