Name: Foros Visgana a.k.a. Duke Diablo
Age: 24
Gender: male
Race: Human
Description: 7' tall, this gigantic, muscular warrior has long, brown hair and a dark tan.
When not wearing his dark armor and a matching helmet, he likes to dress according to the latest court fashions. He has emerald-green eyes which always seem to look into your soul, trying to find your deepest secrets. If it comes to battle, he likes to engage his enemies with his broad, black bastard sword in one hand and a gigantic black tower shield with a red pentagram painted in the middle in the other.
Bio: Born as a son of a duke and a peasant girl, Foros barely escaped his fathers men when they came to his mothers house searching for this 'proof of duke's adultery'(him) and only because midwife hid him in a basket and ran away before they came. Duke's soliders went to search for the midwife, but they were unable to find her for a few days. As for Foros's mother, she was taken to duke's dungeon in secrecy to be interrogated about the whereabouts of her son. A day later, an old veteran came to house where Foros was borned looking for some rest and, if possible, food. He found Foros there, and, judging by the carnage left in duke's soliders wake, he assumed that his parrents were killed and took the boy away to teach him the way of the warrior. Years have passed, and young Foros grew into a mighty warrior under the strict tutelage of the old warrior. When he thought he was ready, the old man told Foros of his real home and what he thought that happened to his parrents. Foros wanted revenge, just as the old man expected. Old man told him that he had learned him all that he could, but that would not be nearly enough. He needed a good weapon and armor if he wanted to take duke down along with his guards, and there was one guarded by the fabled demon Ragnarok, who guarded it in his cave. Foros knew he couldn't handle the demon himself, so he organised a party of thirty men to hunt the demon down. While the men fought the demon and distracted him, Foros slipped in his cave quietly, donned the armor, and took the weapon. Then, he came back and slew the demon from behind. Except him, no one survived that attack.
After that, Foros attacked duke's castle, killed the duke and claimed the title for himself. But, before he did that, he found out the real truth about his childhood. In order to statisfy his lust for vengeance, Foros ordered to have ex-duke's daughters and wife thrown into dungeon and tortured for his pleasure. Since duke's soliders refused obedience, he slew them all and did the dirty job himself. Duke's only son organised a raiding party that cast Foros out, so now Foros wanders the wastes in search for another rise in station… by any means necesarry.
Misc. Info: Foros, although evil in his heart, doesn't appear such at first glance. He is merry, cheerfull and funny, at least while in public. He likes to manipulate people in his never-ending quest for power, use them to further his own goals, and they are often unaware of doing so. He likes to strike his enemies when they are most vunerable, waiting for his chance (and scheming all the time).
I'm sorry if it's the wrong thread, but I didn't know where exactly to post. Is this char OK?
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Name: Phoros Visgana
Age: 19
Gender: male
Race: Human
Description: 6' tall, this gigantic, muscular warrior has long, brown hair and a dark tan.
When not wearing his dark armor and a matching helmet, he likes to dress according to the latest court fashions. He has emerald-green eyes which always seem to look into your soul, trying to find your deepest secrets. If it comes to battle, he likes to engage his enemies with his broad, burnished Spathios sword in one hand, and his black leather Skutamos shield, adorned with red glyphs.
Bio: Born the illegitimate son of a duke and a peasant girl, Phoros barely escaped from his father's men when they came to his mother's house, searching for the 'proof of duke's adultery' only because the midwife hid him in a basket and ran away before they came.
The duke's soliders went to search for the midwife, but they were unable to find her for a few days. As for Phoros's mother, she was taken to duke's dungeon in secrecy to be interrogated about the whereabouts of her son.
A day later, an old veteran came to house where Phoros was born, looking for a place to rest and, if possible, food. He found Phoros there, and, judging by the carnage left in duke's soliders wake, he assumed that his parrents were killed and took the child away to teach him the way of the warrior.
Years passed, and young Phoros grew into a mighty warrior under the strict tutelage of the old warrior.
When he thought he was ready, the old man told Phoros of his real home and what he thought that happened to his parrents. Phoros wanted revenge, just as the old man expected. The old man told Phoros that he had taught him all that he could, but that would not be enough, yet.
Phoros needed a mighty weapon, if he wanted to take the duke and his host of soldiers down. A mighty weapon such as the one guarded by Ragylos, a retired warrior of old, and reputedly a sorcerer and a demon.
So, Phoros set out to recover the relic.
To accomplish this quest, he first needs to assemble a war party and sneak into Ragylos's Castrum.
Only then, with the fabled sword firmly in his grasp, will Phoros be able to take on his father's army, and become duke in his stead.
Misc. Info: Phoros, although evil in his heart, doesn't appear such at first glance. He is merry, cheerful and funny, at least while in public. He tries to manipulate people in his never-ending quest for power, use them to further his own goals, and they are often unaware of doing so. He likes to strike his enemies when they are most vunerable, waiting for his chance (and scheming all the time).