Slightly large post incoming.
Two tiny typos found during Snow Maiden's Lover. When trying to find more info about her lover, you talk to the woman in town and she says "The strangest thing...he doesn't look any younger than he did when I was just a little girl...l" I think there should be an is before the first "...", and shouldn't she say he doesn't look any older?
Gotta say, I am just absolutely in love with your game. I can't get enough of it, and I keep looking forward to the next installment. However, as Bashiku said, do not neglect your personal life and schooling, let alone your future, over trying to get this out as fast as you can. The Tickle Theater is a great place, but it is NEVER more important than your own life. Take your time, even if it takes half a year or more until we see another update, and get the important things out of the way. The people here will wait, and the TT will remain here for when you get back.
I absolutely loved the haunted house. Well, ok, not absolutely loved, but Kefka's laugh + Old school Mario haunted house level theme = pure win in my book. The... voice clips... however, seemed out of place. Oh I'm sure they're funny, just I wasn't expecting those. Just remember, if you keep things like this in, you cannot try and spread The Tower of Gargalesis over the internet, or try and sell it for money. Y'kbow, since you'll get in deep copyright trouble, and it'd be a travesty to see you disappear due to lawsuits.
*cough* And to end on a game related note - I have to say for the first time in your game, I had my stomach turn when seeing the cutscene at the end of Chp. 3. I'm all for tickling... but after reading that... I mean, "she" has been like that for years, if not hundreds (don't remember how long it was said, if it was said at all, the lands have been like this). To know they've been torturing her daily, if not hourly, whenever they are bored... It just rubs me in such a wrong way.
So I am even more eager than ever to see the end of this game, because I want that to stop IMMEDIATELY. Now I have a question - please, PLEASE tell me that torturing the truly bad Mamono, the ones we all KNOW are bad, doesn't give Dark/Evil karma. If it does... well, I guess I'm going to have to drift from the path of the Light, because I must seek justice and revenge for the crimes they've done! 😛issed I will save before each of their fights so I can beat them again and again to pay them back for all this.
Keep up the fantastic work, as you've failed to disappoint. Just remember - work on your future first, and your fanservice second. We'll all be here waiting for you.