STRANDED in HELL ((/F comic, contains demonic nudity(M, F))

[Silentone]

Wow. So that's what she did with her torture break.......impressive and mean all at the same time.

 

[10 armed tkler]

Thats how demons are made...

 

[Bashiku]

Riiiiight... God sided Pentagram on a demon. How didn't I think of that?

Well I doubt you can kill a demon in hell, or get away from hell, but I presume this will be something like Sarah becoming antagonist with ultra powered form 😛

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Riiiiight... God sided Pentagram on a demon. How didn't I think of that?

Well I doubt you can kill a demon in hell, or get away from hell, but I presume this will be something like Sarah becoming antagonist with ultra powered form 😛

Kill? Probably not. But unsummon, or banish? You could try! At least she caught fire... so Sarah may be onto something there.

 

[Ehllychan]

Kill? Probably not. But unsummon, or banish? You could try! At least she caught fire... so Sarah may be onto something there.

Maybe she just wants to make Priëlla suffer some. Like before, when she was beaten up by the other demons. Not being able to die nor anything is exactly why Hell is a scary place after all, you can't get away for the torture 😉

Also, just wanted to let you know that I just read this whole thing right now and though it still has some of the gruesome stuff that I don't really like, I really got into this one. Might be because the Hell setting makes it it so that the violence and such fit the story so I don't mind it much. And it's a story that actually gets you curious about why was Dora sent to hell, and specially if it was really a mistake or if she actually did something to deserve it.

Anyway, keep up the great job. Looking forward to it C:

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Also, just wanted to let you know that I just read this whole thing right now and though it still has some of the gruesome stuff that I don't really like, I really got into this one. Might be because the Hell setting makes it it so that the violence and such fit the story so I don't mind it much. And it's a story that actually gets you curious about why was Dora sent to hell, and specially if it was really a mistake or if she actually did something to deserve it.

Anyway, keep up the great job. Looking forward to it C:

Thanks Ehllychan! 🙂 Dora is lucky to be under Priëlla's supervision, because she only gets tickled, instead of the lot worse stuff that other demons would do to her. But to do a comic in Hell without showing some fragments of what the rest of Hell is like felt somehow unappropriate to me. So yes, there's some less nice stuff going on. And of course the other demons don't respect Priëlla, for being 'a softy'. I had to show that. It's part of the story, and part of the bonding that Dora does with her. Mostly everything is there for a reason. I know some gruesome things have been around in most of my comics, and I don't want to come over as some terrible person (because that's really not who I am) but I could not avoid a certain level of realism in this one. But you don't need to worry. There shouldn't be more of the gruesome stuff really. What you have seen was the bad part. The worst by far. And you'll get your answer, when Dora gets it.

But now, page 15, where you can see what happens next.
Edit: Oh yeah, note the wordplay. I twisted the saying a little around 😉

PAGE 15

Stay tuned, next up is another 'green sky'.

Ilo.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

PAGE 16

Green sky... Dora gets another break. Some unexpected things happen... and then things suddenly fall into place for her. Does she have a destiny? Read on as the story unfolds... but be ready to expect the unexpected... Things may not be what they seem...


to be


continued...

Ilo.
(who senses some speculation coming up...)

 

[Bashiku]

Just to spoil you senses... no speculations here. You are too unpredictable 😛

 

[Featherdemon]

Excellent work! I really like it! 😀

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Just to spoil you senses... no speculations here. You are too unpredictable 😛

Hm. True. I always wonder if I surprise you or if you were one step ahead of me. Sometimes you are. 😉

Excellent work! I really like it! 😀

Thanks a bunch, Feathers! Glad to hear you like it!

And now...
PAGE 17!
...on which you get to see a part of Priëlla's body that you haven't yet seen before!


- I know, it's a teaser, but hey, don't tell me it's not true! 😛

 

[Bashiku]

Naaah... I am never ahead 😛

 

[Silentone]

Uh oh.....That doesn't look good for Dora or the demoness.

 

[colisto]

ofcourse the ellipsis is fallowed by "do you know the way to the planes of sorrow? im a bit lost and you two were the only ones in the vecinity, was i interupting something?" XD jk wouderful story so far

NO NO WAIT "HI im a demon named PLOT CONVENIENCE i came here to ruin this tender moment as to add suspense for the readers so tune in next pannel to find out what happens XD" sorry couldent resist

 

[Ilohnoh1]

ofcourse the ellipsis is fallowed by "do you know the way to the planes of sorrow? im a bit lost and you two were the only ones in the vecinity, was i interupting something?" XD jk wouderful story so far

On the contrary... I admit it could have been funny.
Happy to hear you like the story. 🙂

NO NO WAIT "HI im a demon named PLOT CONVENIENCE i came here to ruin this tender moment as to add suspense for the readers so tune in next pannel to find out what happens XD"

Actually, I didn't put him there to create unnecessary suspense either. This guy looks silly (I know that) but he is ranked higher than you might think at first and he IS there for Priëlla and Dora. The entire next page is covering everything that he has to say... and indeed it pretty much ruins 'their moment'. I'm trying to get that ready for upload tomorrow.

sorry couldent resist

No problem, AvariaDemon. 🙂 I liked your comment, it was funny and it made me laugh. Thanks for posting. 🙂

 

[colisto]

On the contrary... I admit it could have been funny.
Happy to hear you like the story. 🙂

well i like almost anything involving demons <,< im kind of a freak like that XD jk, but seriously duknow what i like so much about demons...

Actually, I didn't put him there to create unnecessary suspense either. This guy looks silly (I know that) but he is ranked higher than you might think at first and he IS there for Priëlla and Dora. The entire next page is covering everything that he has to say... and indeed it pretty much ruins 'their moment'. I'm trying to get that ready for upload tomorrow.

i duknow i think "plot convenience" is the greatest name for a character ever.. i think im going to name more of my characters that just for a good laugh XD. he dosnt look silly he just came in at the right moment like that person when they say " speak now or forever hold your peace" you know the one XD any how cant wait till the next one

No problem, AvariaDemon. 🙂 I liked your comment, it was funny and it made me laugh. Thanks for posting. 🙂

you know what else is funny and will make you laugh? a demon, NAMED AVARIA in your comic, that would be like so awesome XD i duknow

 

[SupportGunner]

Beware of the TOOTHFAIRY FROM HELL!

Nah, seriously, i realy like this and looking forward to see what happens next.

 

[Ilohnoh1]

Beware of the TOOTHFAIRY FROM HELL!
Nah, seriously, i realy like this and looking forward to see what happens next.

Hehe, Basically Priëlla is a little like that. 😉 She's the nicest demon of them all. And not maybe taking teeth from under pillows, but using a toothpick to tickle the hell out of you. Anyway, you can now see what happens next... but what will happen after THAT?

PAGE 18 and "Revenge"

Priëlla is in trouble.

Dora is in trouble.

After what they hear next they are even more in trouble...

And then there's an extra bonus picture, called "Revenge", showing Priëlla vulnerable to whatever you have in mind for her. What will it be? Where will you tickle her first, where will you tickle her most, or do you even have way different things in mind for this vicious tickle demon?

There's a bonus to this bonus picture. I didn't notice this while I was working on it (and when I did notice it was too late to change) but I made a quite serious mistake in this picture. If you are the one who sees what I am talking about (it's not the 'scream sign', nor the fact that the metal construction doesn't continue to the right of it) and are the first one to tell us in a reply to this thread you will get a scene of your dreams involving one or maximum two of the cast. They can be in a specific pose (tickled/tickling or other). Please specify what you would like to see. It needs to be a reply, not a PM.

Another bonus picture follows after this as well and then the story will continue again.

 

[The_Crusader]

In your bonus picture Priella has two right hands.

 

[SupportGunner]

Her leg patterns are different from eachothers in the bonus picture, in the comic their booth the same.

 

[nutznfla]

She changes when stressed...Get OVER it and enjoy the series.

 

[10 armed tkler]

In your bonus picture Priella has two right hands.

Then your seeing it wrong, buddy. One hand is going one way and another the other.

 

[The_Crusader]

No. In the position her left hand is in, it is clearly facing palm out. The thumb would be on the bottom, not the top.

 

[Violetta]

The Crusader is very much correct. Just put your own hand in that position and see which way your thumb points.

 

[The_Crusader]

Thank you bella 🙂

 

[Ilohnoh1]

The Crusader is correct. So you get to pick one or two characters from this series and see him/her/them in a (tickle)pose of your choice. Please let me know (here or in PM) what you would like to see. 🙂

The markings on Priëlla's body do have a bit of a rule. They are everywhere consistent so far except for on page 18, so on this picture they are actually right. The patterns are supposed to go over the top of her lower arm, but over the back of her upper and lower legs (so those are opposite) and then pointing at her armpits over her upper arm. That's not what I meant.

Then there is actually ANOTHER thing in this picture which really isn't possible, even for a Demon like Priëlla, and if someone finds that one, they'll win a picture of their choice (with the same rules) as well. So there's another chance for you to win something!